I realize that you are very sincere when asking this question.
Your subject matter may be great reading especially if you throw in some humor.
As a published author, I would highly recommend practice writing in proper grammatical format at all times.
You have fallen into the horrible mistake of writing like an 8th grade texting princess.
You started a sentence with the word "and". You have capitalized " Basic Training" yet, only once capitalize "I".
I own a small to medium sized business. I interview a fair amount of people every year. The resumes and cover letters I see from university educated people is frightening!
They have fallen into your same dilemma.
This has become the norm and it translates into a distracting, unreadable, hard to follow, sophomoric ramble.
When I see cover letters and resumes written in this fashion, they are immediately rejected by me.
I will not even bother to interview them. I will not risk them corresponding to anyone representing my company in that way.
Break the norm of your generation and become a polished writer.
Practice is the mother of all skills!
Good luck with your story!
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